Deal of the Week! 

Manuscript Critique
Get a free chapter sample and in-depth critique of your work-in-progress. Only $50 for your first 20,000 word count! 

This is is annotative critique. Includes comments in the margins of your manuscript and a 2-5 page summary of my thoughts. I look at pacing and flow, character development, dialogue, tension, plot and character arcs, scene construction, climax and resolution, voice, style, and minor grammar edits. This does NOT include full copy editing, rewriting, or proofreading. Any further edits are subject to my regular editing prices. No payment plan will be provided for this deal. Average turn around time is 5-7 days. 

Offer only valid for new clients. Expires 11/25/2017. 

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Manuscript Critiques

This discount applies ONLY to members or campnano cabin members of WitlingWriter.  
Partial Payments accepted up to invoice due date. Paypal payment accepted.
See what’s included in a MS Critique and request a price quote.
For any other payment negotiation, contact me today.

Thank you for your friendship and support! ♥ You know who you are.

Manuscript Critique

I’m booking one more manuscript critique for the last week of June. If you’re interested in sending me an unfinished/partial or completed WIP, I give an deep critique with annotative comments, as well as an overall report on the big picture issues of your story. To learn more: Click Here or you can contact me. 

My book review and beta reading requests are currently CLOSED for JUNE, but I’ll be booking for July soon, so go ahead and send me a request 💚

MS Critiques, Book Reviews & Beta Reading

I’m now accepting requests for Manuscript Critiques, Book Reviews/ARC and Beta Reading for the month of JUNE. I accept a wide variety of genres and formats. Click on the appropriate link below to submit a request, and check out my testimonials while you’re at it.

After doing annotative (in-line) and content critiques as a beta reader, I’ve decide to offer manuscript critiques with more in-depth feedback for complete or unfinished manuscripts. My beta reading now consists of 1-2 pages of feedback or a book review on my blog for polished manuscripts and ARC. My book reviews will remain the same, and will be posted on this blog, Amazon and Goodreads.

Manuscript Critique

Beta Reading

Book Reviews

Thanks to all who submitted in the past, and who took the time to write me a testimony (if you haven’t, please send one). I’ve enjoyed reading your WIPs & books! You ALL inspire me. ♥

halynn

Where is Heather?

I’m here, I promise. Can’t you tell? I’ve changed my layout at least three times this week.

I’m just a little busy.

It’s not an excuse. Well, maybe it is, but it’s a good one this time. And, no, I’m not drinking wine as I write this…get out of here. Here’s what I’m up to:

On top of outlining and writing my own book, I’m revamping my website, adding free and paid services to the mix. What use is my degree in English if I’m not using it? And, I have all the time in the world–well, maybe not all day, but most of the day–to sit around and read your manuscripts and give you feedback.

Freelance Editing is the goal, so I’m brushing up on my editing skills. I’m still beta reading, but I’m fine-tuning the differences between my beta, critiques and editing feedback. I’m also continuing to post book reviews as I work my way through my TBR list.

I’ve learned a lot about track changes recently…who knew, right? I wish someone would have told me about this option before now. It would have come in handy in college. I’m giddy over the fact I can now do track changes in both google docs and microsoft word.

That’s a little of what I’ve been doing lately. I’m also hosting #winowip, and eventually #winowipchat, so check them out on twitter. We have fun!

*my services page is still under construction,
so please email me if you have specific questions or requests*